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the beginnig(part 1)-1

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1 the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Thu May 29, 2008 3:48 pm

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" To think my life use to be simple. I use to just sit around and do chours all day. But now I go around from town to town helping people, doing odd jobs and making a living from it. It all started on the faithful day." Remembering how he got his powers tank continued to write in in journal that he carryed around with him but never used it until
now.
(Entering his flash back)
' Aww man I can't believe that the village elder is doing this to me.' Getting water from the lake from the out sket of his village tank noticed some wierd men that he never saw before enter the village. Not paying much mind to them he continued onward to the lake when he heard people screaming, and the sound of explosions happen all over the village
.' No mom' rushing back to the village only thinking about his mom found the men cause all of the problems. Seeing his mom right in front of children from the village,protecting them tank tackle the man
with the sword in his hand while the other two were on the other side of the village.
"your going to pay for the kid." The man rised his hand up then fired a dark blast that engulf tanks hold body cause him more and more pain as it kept on going." Ahhh!!!" was the only thing tank could
say." I'm amazed that some pathic little kid like you can actually stand up to my 'infitnat dark matter void'. This attack cause extarnal and intarnal damage the longer its being held." Continueing to hold the
attack in place tank started to fade away little by little, when he heard a voice call out to him.
" Tank."
" who are you."
"Hey kid stop talking to yourself." The man didn't know what really was going on until it was too late. Waking up from his black out state tanks hole body started to glow.when tank left up his head eletisity started
to engulf his body clearing up the dark energy that was around him in the beginning.
" What. But how?" tank just opened his hand and a powerful blast of energy came rain down from the sky and destroyed the man easly. The other two men seeing this tryed to run but it was no use tank had spotted them already.
" Thunder.....barrage!!!!" mutiple lighting stuck the two men and the ground around them destroying everything in sight.

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2 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Fri May 30, 2008 1:25 pm

lardyn

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OMG!!! is this ben!!! im shocked!!! (clapping)

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3 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Fri May 30, 2008 1:32 pm

youkai

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who knew

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4 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Fri May 30, 2008 1:41 pm

lardyn

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Druid
lol its very unlike ben.....hhmmm.....

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5 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Fri May 30, 2008 4:42 pm

youkai

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na i preety sure he wrote it

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6 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Sat May 31, 2008 11:13 am

Shadow008

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well either way it was a pretty nice first chap. ^^


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7 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Sat May 31, 2008 5:59 pm

youkai

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yes it was

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8 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Sat May 31, 2008 6:38 pm

Selfier

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aside from a few spelling errors and some hiccups it was all nice, kudos to you ben!


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9 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Sat May 31, 2008 6:55 pm

youkai

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umm. rightt wat ever

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10 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Sun Jun 01, 2008 4:03 am

Selfier

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umm wat u mean wat ever?


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11 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:00 am

Abyssol910

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He doesn`t know, i asked him before

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12 Re: the beginnig(part 1)-1 on Mon Jun 02, 2008 4:22 pm

youkai

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yea sorry bout that i was just bored

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