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the beginnig(part 2)-2

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1 the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 12:37 pm

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waking up holding his head tank felt like something was alive in side him." wh..what happened.?
" you killed the three men who attack the village a few days ago." a voice came out from the shadows.
" who said that?" trying to get up when someones hand grabbed him and layed him back down.
" rest some more. all your questions will be answer later." leaving the room closed the door behind him.
" who was that?" about to get up again felt a sharp pain in his ribs which brough back the events of that day the village was attack. hearing the crying of all the childrens. the screams from the parents. the smell from all the destruction and the smell of blood in the air. once all of the events finish coming back to him tank blackout yet again.

" hey are you ok?" hearing the voice of his little sister tank opened his eyes and saw her standing on a chair looking at him.
" yeah im fine."
" can you get up tank? theirs someone you need to meet." running to the door his little sister turned back and then just smiled back to him." meet me in that mean old man's home. ok?" not waiting for an answer ran of again.
" damn it what does he want now?" when tank got to his feet he saw a letter fall to the floor. tank pick it up and read the context inside it.
" tank if you read this letter then you survive the eletric spirit awaking. i will meet you in the elders place to answer your questions. and to teach you how to control it. by now you should be feeling something, something like a living entity inside of your body. if your ready to learn then come, but if your scared then never return to this village as you will only be a threat to them all!!!!" wanting to figure out what the person was talking about and how did he know what he was feeling went to where he was told to go.
" hello tank I'am Onisa. and I'am the one who wrote you that letter."

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2 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 1:29 pm

lardyn

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Druid
cool story ben. i like the looks of it

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3 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 1:32 pm

youkai

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yea not bad

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4 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 1:41 pm

lardyn

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Druid
nice powers to

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5 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 4:48 pm

youkai

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Flame Demon
yea i think you can kill me with that thunder barrage

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6 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 4:52 pm

Abyssol910

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Mercenary
i agree with log boy

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7 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 4:53 pm

youkai

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Flame Demon
lol i wonder why

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8 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 5:17 pm

Abyssol910

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Mercenary
shut up 1 foot brick wall

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9 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 5:18 pm

youkai

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Flame Demon
said wat? wat was you going to do to me? O_o

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10 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 5:24 pm

Abyssol910

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Mercenary
lol i called you a one foot tall brick wall

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11 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 5:34 pm

youkai

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Flame Demon
oh ok but u still suck gtg byeeeee

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12 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Fri May 30, 2008 5:46 pm

Abyssol910

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Mercenary
*cough*loser*cough* later

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13 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Sat May 31, 2008 6:01 pm

youkai

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Flame Demon
the hell wit u man but oh well

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14 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Sat May 31, 2008 6:50 pm

Selfier

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lol you guys are funny anyways it's good a good story so far but you seem skip stuff like if you are having blackouts or something...


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15 Re: the beginnig(part 2)-2 on Sat May 31, 2008 6:56 pm

youkai

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thats probably part of the story

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