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1 The Goodbyes!?-003 on Tue Dec 11, 2007 2:51 am

Reverse had left the Elder home and notice school was over and decide to first go and visit Raine to say goodbye and afterwards to his family. The town was blooming with people seeing it was the beginning of summer tourists would start coming. He reached Raine house and notice she was outside picking flowers she quickly noticed Toru.

Raine:*smiles*Hey Toru nice to see your face you Idiot why weren't you at school thats not like you?

Reverse: I was busy with some family things so how was ur day

Raine: Real boring nothing happened it was just waste.

Reverse:Ummm.....Raine I have something to tell u....

Raine: What is it Perv*smiles*?

Reverse: Nothing Raine forget about it I well tell you tomorrow my mom is waiting bye Raine see ya soon...

Reverse at last mintune decicde to leave without a word to Raine.....

Reverse run home to pack his things. When he find his mom with a new runesack and a box lunch.

Mom:Toru I know ur leaving so here I packed your things

Reverse: Thanks mom...I have somethings to do before I leave

Reverse went upstairs and wrote a letter to Raine explain what he had to and why. He change his clothes and pack his book into the runesack then grab his letter and went downstairs.

Reverse:Mother this letter is for Raine if she passes by can you give it 2 her please?

Mom:of course toru....and you leaving now

Reverse:Yes mother I am....so tell sister I said goodbye...

Mom:yes take care soon bye...

Reverse: Goodbye mom

Reverse left with many dobuts of the path he chose but He aspect it and was ready.
He went to the new goal that went ahead......



At the same time new windows of opportunities had open for Lenga....

???:Sir its been reported that your son has left south in direction of the forest...

Lenga:Good now let the games begin keep a close watch to the family and the girl!

???: Yes sir...



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2 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Tue Dec 11, 2007 3:36 am

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Could this be romance??? or just a kinda awkward moment??? either way I wonder what the gift is...


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Half Elf: "What possible value does one burdened to exist with cursed blood have?... Sometimes running away is the one way to save yourself... Humans are so arrogant.

Do you have the dragon balls to do it?

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3 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Tue Dec 11, 2007 10:37 am

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PIZZA!


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4 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Fri Dec 14, 2007 9:20 pm

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I wanna know what the gifth is...


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5 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Fri Dec 21, 2007 1:11 am

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ok reverse when r u goin to write the part of the story that tells what the gifth is??


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6 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Fri Dec 21, 2007 1:50 am

soon and i changed it so it can match with another part so yea this chapter is finally done enjoy ^_^


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7 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:56 pm

new windows of opportunities, ooh i cant wait to read the rest of this story^^

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8 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sat Dec 22, 2007 1:34 am

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ok..hi chaos kunoichi


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9 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sat Dec 22, 2007 1:36 am

Hi there ^^

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10 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sat Dec 22, 2007 2:57 am

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cool u actualy answer


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11 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sat Dec 22, 2007 12:53 pm

nice and smoth like man should be, you realy developing this character into wat it should be.

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12 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sat Dec 22, 2007 2:24 pm

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wait what? he is heading south? what forest is he going to? i'm confused...

I know what he will do but I thought the forest was north of where is Reverse's home? how come he haves the name of his book and not Toru? when did that happen? i'm doing the same then...


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"No creature is born with the sole purpose of dying." "Trust is an easy thing to destroy, but it can take a long time to built."


Half Elf: "What possible value does one burdened to exist with cursed blood have?... Sometimes running away is the one way to save yourself... Humans are so arrogant.

Do you have the dragon balls to do it?

I'm only human. I have the right to change my mind at any given moment without reason.
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13 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:19 pm

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O...K... frankly I have read better and I don't read a lot, you story feels empty it needs spice it needs flavor, the long dialouge kills the story is too much for so little, the story itself I really don't know how to say it I don't know if it's good or bad...


Ohh! that's why I couldn't read ir it's way too boring! ^.^


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14 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sun Dec 23, 2007 3:17 am

Yeah i always answer ^^

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15 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:22 am

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No you don't Chaos, I left you a message and you never read it or something, but is fine by me... the Puertorican boy talked to the Australian


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"No creature is born with the sole purpose of dying." "Trust is an easy thing to destroy, but it can take a long time to built."


Half Elf: "What possible value does one burdened to exist with cursed blood have?... Sometimes running away is the one way to save yourself... Humans are so arrogant.

Do you have the dragon balls to do it?

I'm only human. I have the right to change my mind at any given moment without reason.
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16 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:49 pm

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lol so wha u up 2 chaos


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17 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Sun Dec 23, 2007 10:54 pm

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Nobody there is something called pm just for that...


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18 Re: The Goodbyes!?-003 on Mon Dec 24, 2007 1:38 am

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lol yeah I forgoth srry


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