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1 A Mistake!?-004 on Mon Dec 31, 2007 5:56 pm

Reverse had been wandering for days lost in the forest by now he wanted to turn back but the only problem was that he didn't know where back was. No he wasn't going to give up so fast he knew where he had to go it was just something he must have ignored he went to his book bag and took out his map. While gazing at the map he notice that he was headed the right way but why was he not there yet before he set out he knew the estimated time it took. He had past the estimated time why wasn't he there yet. He reflect the thought and it was possible he ignored the proper path that was stated by the book.

He took the book and read what he was suppose to do exactlly......

He went to the exact location where the book stated and waiting till night. He was in luck all the requirements where meet all he had to do was recite when the full moon completely hit the spot.Now it was ready Reverse quickly went in the spot and recite the chant.

Reverse:Servant of the moon Protector of the forest acknowledge my effort and grant me the chance to learn the truth of thy glory I recite with the humble of intentions...

Suddenly a lake appeared showing the refection of the full moon and the little girl came out the lake and spoke...

???:hello we have been waiting for you the master will come out soon
Reverse:oh ok well so what your name mine is toru
???: Why do you want my name.....anyways the master is ready....

The little girl then join a bunch of other girls and boys that suddenly appeared out of nowhere. Then a Woman appeared in front of Reverse and spoke...

???:So you come to me for training right well of course i will help you I mean you did past the test and yes it me is Martel

Reverse: Thank you *bows downs*

Martel: Now common on you don't have to be so humble anymore. I will train you starting tomorrow and you have a partner I hope you don't mind.

Reverse: No I don't....you don't even know my name Martel...

Martel: Do I really need to know ? Don't worry when I call you will know *smiles* now sleep you begin tomorrow no breaks.

Reverse set up camp and went to sleep wondering who was his partner and what kind of person was really Martel....?



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2 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Mon Dec 31, 2007 6:25 pm

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I see you did some changes again, that's great ^^ but I thought it would take longer for him to get there. I think is important to put in the name of the forest, wasn't it a part of the Sacred Forest?


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3 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:41 pm

nice, nice i like how the story is developing real nice

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4 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Tue Jan 01, 2008 3:17 am

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I like the story very much! ^^


please change the dialouge it sounds like a play and plays make me remember High School Musical which makes me upset...


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5 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Wed Jan 02, 2008 3:17 am

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lol high school musical sucks


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6 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Wed Jan 02, 2008 3:46 pm

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you suck bitch say that again and you'll wake up next morning in the hospital. you think i'm kidding?! don't dare test me

today's topic at school was exaggeration...


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"No creature is born with the sole purpose of dying." "Trust is an easy thing to destroy, but it can take a long time to built."


Half Elf: "What possible value does one burdened to exist with cursed blood have?... Sometimes running away is the one way to save yourself... Humans are so arrogant.

Do you have the dragon balls to do it?

I'm only human. I have the right to change my mind at any given moment without reason.
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7 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:42 pm

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escuela musical apesta


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8 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Wed Jan 02, 2008 5:01 pm

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no Musical De Escuela Superior ummmm.... chupa?


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9 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Wed Jan 02, 2008 5:23 pm

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........weird....


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10 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:34 pm

Ummm Why the fu*k are you talking about highschool in my topic? Anyway I need help in the next chapter anyone can help?


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11 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Thu Jan 03, 2008 10:17 pm

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you sound like is wrong to talk about high school musical...


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12 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:14 am

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is it rong...right now I cant help maybe if u talk to me on msn and ask me direct question I can but idk cuz right now im buzy with my own story im actualy gething into it XD


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13 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:41 pm

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I'm a good listener and adviser...


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"No creature is born with the sole purpose of dying." "Trust is an easy thing to destroy, but it can take a long time to built."


Half Elf: "What possible value does one burdened to exist with cursed blood have?... Sometimes running away is the one way to save yourself... Humans are so arrogant.

Do you have the dragon balls to do it?

I'm only human. I have the right to change my mind at any given moment without reason.
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14 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Sat Jan 05, 2008 2:02 am

so does anyone have ideas?im kinda stuck!!!!


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15 Re: A Mistake!?-004 on Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:27 pm

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Start off the training and introduce the other person. Think off stuff that could be used as test from Martel or only say a few, skip some and just concentrate in the main plot. I know what happens, and so do you, just built it to that moment or put it there next. It doesn't matter if you extend it now, leave a gap like I've done if necessary and later get back to it.


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"No creature is born with the sole purpose of dying." "Trust is an easy thing to destroy, but it can take a long time to built."


Half Elf: "What possible value does one burdened to exist with cursed blood have?... Sometimes running away is the one way to save yourself... Humans are so arrogant.

Do you have the dragon balls to do it?

I'm only human. I have the right to change my mind at any given moment without reason.
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